Kia ora! I am a year 6 student in room 5 at Ahipara School, in the far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Kia ora Harmony, I like that you have shared some information about yourself. Maybe next time you could include a blurb explaining what this post is about. Also I was wondering what is the connection between the photo and your writing? Keep trying Harmony!
Hello Harmony! How are you? I am Eden from Paroa school and my class is one of your tuhi mai tuhi atu buddies! Your blog is super cool! This is a great piece of work! Keep up the good work. From eden
Hi Harmony, Its Clara from Paroa School on the West Coast. That picture looks really fun! I love how you added a really cool picture that will bring peoples eyes to it. Maybe next time you could improve by adding more information about yourself! Byeeeeeeeee
Hi Harmony It's me Katelyn. (Your blogging buddy) I like how you put a picture to catch peoples eyes. Maybe next time you could add more information about yourself. Keep up the great work. BYE!!!!
Kia ora Harmony,
ReplyDeleteI like that you have shared some information about yourself. Maybe next time you could include a blurb explaining what this post is about. Also I was wondering what is the connection between the photo and your writing? Keep trying Harmony!
Hello Harmony! How are you? I am Eden from Paroa school and my class is one of your tuhi mai tuhi atu buddies! Your blog is super cool! This is a great piece of work! Keep up the good work. From eden
ReplyDeleteHi Harmony, Its Clara from Paroa School on the West Coast. That picture looks really fun! I love how you added a really cool picture that will bring peoples eyes to it. Maybe next time you could improve by adding more information about yourself! Byeeeeeeeee
ReplyDeleteHi Harmony It's me Katelyn. (Your blogging buddy) I like how you put a picture to catch peoples eyes. Maybe next time you could add more information about yourself. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteBYE!!!!